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author | Teemu Hukkanen <tjhukkan@iki.fi> | 2020-04-12 09:52:41 +0200 |
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committer | Lars Wirzenius <liw@liw.fi> | 2020-04-12 11:20:09 +0300 |
commit | 91d98c05084d558bf4d95528b8ff98cbf57c1f5e (patch) | |
tree | ca0f97bd51f027b522dda4377193a1cabb26a81b | |
parent | e1c593dbd1351e74210413cd645882fc785e1665 (diff) | |
download | ideas-91d98c05084d558bf4d95528b8ff98cbf57c1f5e.tar.gz |
Use names instead of pronouns in example for consistency and clarity
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diff --git a/email2-v2-draft.md b/email2-v2-draft.md index 71bcf0b..df92aba 100644 --- a/email2-v2-draft.md +++ b/email2-v2-draft.md @@ -294,9 +294,9 @@ delegation. For example, if you and Alfred have a mutual friend, Bruce, you can give Bruce a stamp that authorises Bruce to issue single-use stamps to other -identities. If Bruce thinks you and Alfred should know each other, he +identities. If Bruce thinks you and Alfred should know each other, Bruce can issue Alfred a stamp that lets Alfred send you a single email. If -you like Alfred, you can issue him further stamps. +you like Alfred, you can issue further stamps to Alfred. An employer runs their own email server, and that server determines which stamps it accepts. This lets an employer to issue stamps on behalf |