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authorTeemu Hukkanen <tjhukkan@iki.fi>2020-04-12 09:52:41 +0200
committerLars Wirzenius <liw@liw.fi>2020-04-12 11:20:09 +0300
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Use names instead of pronouns in example for consistency and clarity
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@@ -294,9 +294,9 @@ delegation.
For example, if you and Alfred have a mutual friend, Bruce, you can give
Bruce a stamp that authorises Bruce to issue single-use stamps to other
-identities. If Bruce thinks you and Alfred should know each other, he
+identities. If Bruce thinks you and Alfred should know each other, Bruce
can issue Alfred a stamp that lets Alfred send you a single email. If
-you like Alfred, you can issue him further stamps.
+you like Alfred, you can issue further stamps to Alfred.
An employer runs their own email server, and that server determines
which stamps it accepts. This lets an employer to issue stamps on behalf