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@@ -69,8 +69,8 @@ Problems with the existing email system
* Spam, or unsolicited bulk messages. Worse, anti-spam measures drive
centralisation, and are still ineffective, especially for those not
- using the huge providers. End result: you either sacrifice privacy or
- you get tons of spam.
+ using one of the huge centralised providers. End result: you either
+ sacrifice privacy or you get tons of spam.
- Spam is a result of the desirable feature that anyone can email
anyone, combined with the fact that sending an email costs