Tweak wording

Based on feedback from Holger Levsen.

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-<!-- [[!meta title="Hacker Noir"]] -->
-
 # Wat?
 
-"Hacker Noir" is a story about software development. It's incomplete,
-but being written by [Lars Wirzenius][]. Finished chapters are
-published here about once a month, and announced on [Lars's blog][].
+"Hacker Noir" is a story about software development, by
+[Lars Wirzenius][]. The story isn't finished yet, but in the process
+of being written. Finished chapters are published here about once a
+month, and announced on [Lars's blog][].
 
 [Lars Wirzenius]: http://liw.fi/
 [Lars's blog]: http://blog.liw.fi/