|author||Lars Wirzenius <firstname.lastname@example.org>||2017-01-08 11:23:25 +0200|
|committer||Lars Wirzenius <email@example.com>||2017-01-08 11:23:25 +0200|
Language fixes from laverne
1 files changed, 3 insertions, 3 deletions
diff --git a/negotiation.mdwn b/negotiation.mdwn
index 7fa9bae..0e989c7 100644
@@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ to get blunt with. So far, so good.
"The main issue we have is in fact your corporate culture.
You're a startup, in the worst Silicon Valley style. Almost
-all your people young and male, and you have a strong macho
+all your people are young and male, and you have a strong macho
culture. Long hours, hard work, hard play, all the hallmarks
of being manly men who win. You got a big pile of venture
capital cash recently, and that won't help. Your culture,
@@ -378,8 +378,8 @@ you."
The SmartHome techies are looking at each other.
-"Please look at the big monitor." There monitor shows a window with
-buttons like "board room locks", and "heating". "You should know that
+"Please look at the big monitor." The monitor shows a window with
+clickable buttons like "board room locks", and "heating". "You should know that
application. It's the open source HomeApp application, which someone's
written to control your gadgets. It's quite popular, and it's included
in Debian, so it's readily available. Works quite well, and requires