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authorThomas Hochstein <>2018-06-10 16:05:13 +0200
committerLars Wirzenius <>2018-06-13 09:04:46 +0300
commitcfb38478c6455f2c8f3e166a19cbdea2c0007317 (patch)
parent1f683ce68d82fb2a4ced06a2ad5a8bfb605b0b1c (diff)
Please drop or squash this commit.
You switched from first person "I" in the first chapters to third person "Anna" in the later ones, but "Anna" raising "my" hands doesn't work out, I think.
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@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ her mouth. An evil glint shows up in her eyes.
"I'm not saying they're good. But we should look at them and
give them a chance."
-Anna raises both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a
+I raise both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a
sign that everyone should be calm. In Andrew's case, that he
should stay calm, since he's never anything else. "I sense a
rough consensus that we should give them a second chance. I