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authorThomas Hochstein <thh@inter.net>2018-06-10 16:05:13 +0200
committerLars Wirzenius <liw@liw.fi>2018-06-13 09:04:46 +0300
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You switched from first person "I" in the first chapters to third person "Anna" in the later ones, but "Anna" raising "my" hands doesn't work out, I think.
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@@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ her mouth. An evil glint shows up in her eyes.
"I'm not saying they're good. But we should look at them and
give them a chance."
-Anna raises both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a
+I raise both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a
sign that everyone should be calm. In Andrew's case, that he
should stay calm, since he's never anything else. "I sense a
rough consensus that we should give them a second chance. I