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author | Thomas Hochstein <thh@inter.net> | 2018-06-10 16:05:13 +0200 |
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committer | Lars Wirzenius <liw@liw.fi> | 2018-06-13 09:04:46 +0300 |
commit | cfb38478c6455f2c8f3e166a19cbdea2c0007317 (patch) | |
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Please drop or squash this commit.
You switched from first person "I" in the
first chapters to third person "Anna" in
the later ones, but "Anna" raising "my"
hands doesn't work out, I think.
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diff --git a/negotiation.mdwn b/negotiation.mdwn index ce59a33..03188ef 100644 --- a/negotiation.mdwn +++ b/negotiation.mdwn @@ -47,7 +47,7 @@ her mouth. An evil glint shows up in her eyes. "I'm not saying they're good. But we should look at them and give them a chance." -Anna raises both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a +I raise both of my hands, hands flat, palms outward, in a sign that everyone should be calm. In Andrew's case, that he should stay calm, since he's never anything else. "I sense a rough consensus that we should give them a second chance. I |