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diff --git a/assault.mdwn b/assault.mdwn index f1a0c92..45219b4 100644 --- a/assault.mdwn +++ b/assault.mdwn @@ -1,6 +1,6 @@ # Assault -It's been a couple of weeks. It's late on Thursday evening. Anna is +It's been a couple of weeks. It's late on a Thursday evening. Anna is sitting in the subway train, on a bench. On the Helsinki subway the trains are orange, and the benches are orange. Ths benches are in pairs to form booths, ostensibly to get the famously asocial locals to @@ -32,7 +32,7 @@ avoid his dirty shoes. The train ride continues for a while. Dumber keeps accidentally kicking the Playstation, and trying to grab the food bag from Dumb. -Dumb keeps the bag out reach and complaining about the safety of his +Dumb keeps the bag out of reach and complaining about the safety of his gaming equipment. Dumber gets bored and starts looking at Anna, then poking her with his @@ -70,7 +70,7 @@ He came over and took care of my face, and held me while I cried." like gentleman." "Yes, he was very gentle." Anna makes a wry smile, then winces. -Smiling is clearly painful. The takes a pill bottle from her drawer, +Smiling is clearly painful. She takes a pill bottle from her drawer, extracts a pill, and takes it with a gulp from the glass of water on her desk. @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ a while." She turns off her laptop, and packs it in her backpack, then slinks out of the office to go home. On the way she stops at a grocery store, -to fill up on foodstuffs: bananas, appled, pears, and pine apple for a +to fill up on foodstuffs: bananas, apples, pears, and pine apple for a fruit salad; eggs, milk, flour, and butter for pancakes. She fully intends to pamper herself with unhealthy food. |