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@@ -86,7 +86,7 @@ to arrive by courier.
The courier arrives by noon. Nina signs for the delivery,
and carries the boxes to her lab, a large room with plenty
of shelves and desks so there's room for spreading hardware
-around. It is her sanctum, the rest of aren't supposed to
+around. It is her sanctum, the rest of us aren't supposed to
enter without asking for permission.
The lab is filled with furniture and bits and pieces of
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ There is a murmur of approval, and much nodding. Nina looks
satisfied. She goes to her laptop, opens up Inkscape, and
quickly makes a drawing with the words "SmartHome Torture
Chamber" laid out nicely and using a Germanic font. She
-punches a key combination, and the printer in corner of the
+punches a key combination, and the printer in a corner of the
lab spits out a few sheets. Nina gets the sheets, which turn
out to be A4 size labels, with the Inkscape design now
printed on them. She peels off the labels and attaches them
@@ -653,7 +653,7 @@ next."
"Good, that's what I want to hear. While we do not track
work hours here, we do not ever want to see someone burn
-out. I and Robin have both done that at least a couple of
+out. Me and Robin have both done that at least a couple of
times each, and we won't let it happen to anyone in the
Team."
@@ -757,7 +757,7 @@ they need to think they have all the control, even if they
can't be allowed to have any control. A project actually
controlled by the client is doomed. They should have a
little influence, but their control should be limited to
-fairly loose setting of scope and constraint.
+a fairly loose setting of scope and constraint.
I'm going to have to deal with this, but it's getting late,
and I'm tired. Diplomacy requires a lot of energy and time.