From c6f0b7883234d146a84408bc5ed8e5cc97ef5579 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Lars Wirzenius Date: Sun, 8 Jan 2017 11:23:25 +0200 Subject: Language fixes from laverne --- negotiation.mdwn | 6 +++--- 1 file changed, 3 insertions(+), 3 deletions(-) (limited to 'negotiation.mdwn') diff --git a/negotiation.mdwn b/negotiation.mdwn index 7fa9bae..0e989c7 100644 --- a/negotiation.mdwn +++ b/negotiation.mdwn @@ -181,7 +181,7 @@ to get blunt with. So far, so good. "The main issue we have is in fact your corporate culture. You're a startup, in the worst Silicon Valley style. Almost -all your people young and male, and you have a strong macho +all your people are young and male, and you have a strong macho culture. Long hours, hard work, hard play, all the hallmarks of being manly men who win. You got a big pile of venture capital cash recently, and that won't help. Your culture, @@ -378,8 +378,8 @@ you." The SmartHome techies are looking at each other. -"Please look at the big monitor." There monitor shows a window with -buttons like "board room locks", and "heating". "You should know that +"Please look at the big monitor." The monitor shows a window with +clickable buttons like "board room locks", and "heating". "You should know that application. It's the open source HomeApp application, which someone's written to control your gadgets. It's quite popular, and it's included in Debian, so it's readily available. Works quite well, and requires -- cgit v1.2.1