Wording tweaks

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 3 deletions

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@@ -46,13 +46,15 @@ Here's my checklist for doing a weekly review:
 * Review areas of focus, goals.
 * Re-process inbox.
 
-It's common for me to postpone doing a review, since I'm tired or busy
-or have any of a number of other excuses. In some cases, I postpone the
+It's common for me to postpone doing a review, if I'm tired or busy
+or have any of a number of other excuses. If it gets really bad, 
+I postpone the
 review for months. In that case, it can take a bit of an effort to do
 the review, which acts as further encouragement to push it forward.
 
 The way I get out of that is that I need to be reminded of the strong
-feeling of relief and control that I get after doing a review properly.
+feeling of relief and being in control that I get after doing a review 
+properly.
 I feel that I'm on top of things, that regardless of what surprises
 the universe may throw at me next, I know where I am now and what I need
 to do next. (And then I often go read the Internet instead, but that's