Assorted spelling and language adjustments.

Signed-off-by: Thomas Hochstein <thh@inter.net>

1 files changed, 5 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/negotiation.mdwn b/negotiation.mdwn
index e7ded16..ce59a33 100644
--- a/negotiation.mdwn
+++ b/negotiation.mdwn
@@ -435,7 +435,7 @@ make sure the SmartHome guys understand they're being humiliated.
 
 The guy looks puzzled for a moment, then speaks. "Please?" Nina lazily
 turns to her laptop, and taps a key. The door locks click-clack again.
-The big monitor also shows that the turned off the heating.
+The big monitor also shows that she turned off the heating.
 
 I look at the old guy. He's still sitting in his chair, with his hands
 flat on the table. "Is there something you should say, sir?" He
@@ -452,7 +452,7 @@ could you tell us the new password, please? If it pleases you."
 
 Nina is clearly enjoying the situation. "Sure. I'll save you the
 hassle of having to physically reset all the gadgets. The new password
-is 'iabasaisfa', which is short for 'I am bad at security and I should
+is 'iabasaisfb', which is short for 'I am bad at security and I should
 feel bad'. All lower case."
 
 The SmartHomers being now properly cowed, I walk the through the rest
@@ -512,7 +512,7 @@ Anyway, Robin, how do you feel working with them?"
 
 "They're still brogrammers, and I don't think that will ever change.
 However, after today, they know we can humiliate them at will, and I'm
-willing to assume they're behave out of self-protection, if nothing
+willing to assume they'll behave out of self-protection, if nothing
 else."
 
 "We can't pull stunts like this again. Their fragile male egos won't
@@ -532,7 +532,7 @@ Robin takes over. "That's an excellent point, Bert. Here's how I think
 we divide this up. Nina sets up and maintains a lab with their
 hardware so we have something to work with. Andrew does most of the
 porting, with help from Bert and possibly others. It'll be a good
-learning experience for Bert. I and Nina help them redesign their
+learning experience for Bert. Me and Nina help them redesign their
 applications to run on our platform, and review everything so it's
 secure and sensible. Anna, you keep track of everything and make sure
 we have what we need to work smoothly, as usual. OK?"
@@ -587,7 +587,7 @@ also let's us avoid a lot of bugs, which saves a ton of debugging
 work, and thus time. We have a reputation of delivering quality, and
 this is one of the ways in which we achieve it.
 
-"OK, Nina, if there's anything you to buy, you know what to do."
+"OK, Nina, if there's anything you need to buy, you know what to do."
 
 "Are we working from our office, or theirs? Should I ready the
 portaserver?"